My favourite possession!!!

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My favourite possession is a backpack.I can't live without it. My backpack is black. It is an idea ofVitaliy Abalakov. The has gota trinket. Thetrinket is golden.I sometimes take my backpack to school.St. Nicolas brought it to me in 2017.My back pack is small. I can have a lot of things in it. I really enjoy my backpack.

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1st picture - My favourite possession;

2nd picture-phone My favourite possession is a phone.It is made of metal.
The phone can take photos.You can play games or listen to music. There is a flashlight in the phone. You can use the Net or YOUtube.I can't imagine my life without it.

3d picture - My favourite possession is a phone. I like taking photos and social networkings,especially, "Instagram". My mobile's phone colour is gold. My cover is transparent.

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My favourite pet-is my chinchilla. I can not live without it. Her name is Musia. She has got black fur and a white belly. She has got a black fluffy with a grey tail too. Musia has got big black eyes. The peculiarity of my chinchilla-is her very long moustache. She likes running and jumping. She is little. I love my chinchilla Musia very much, because she is beautiful, clever and fluffy. My chinchilla is probably the best pet in world!!![Ви повинні бути зареєстровані та підключені , щоб побачити це зображення]

My favourite pet-is my chinchilla. I can not live without it. Her name is Musia. She has got black fur and a white belly. She has got a black fluffy....with a grey tail too. Musia has got big black eyes. The peculiarity of my chinchilla-is her very long moustache. She likes running and jumping. She is little. I love my chinchilla Musia very much, because she is beautiful, clever and fluffy. My chinchilla is probably the best pet in world!!!

Natalia, everything is great! There are many hard words  in your story! You have missed one word in it!
What about photo of your best pet?

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